Timing.

We have not quite reached 2 minuets yet so we have slowed down our second scene of the close up and fade of the picture of the swings at the play park which also creates more tension and allowed the audience to understand what is going on more. We also have also replaced our birds eye view shot of the dinner table with another one as we planned to freeze frame it so we could add the children actors in and fade out the children's names one by one to link into the disappearance of each of them as there lives fade away. However the original one we were using the mothers arm was still in the frame at the end of the shot therefore we had to use another shot in order to freeze it however this shot jolts at the beginning but we hope that the creative use of titles will over look the jolting.
Freeze frame of table with added titles: